I'm sure you read this very often but all the flash I've seen you make suffers a lot from characters shaking like mad, that's unnatural. And a lot of the scenes have no timing, everything seems to drag on too long. Time to step up your game man. This is lazy work to say the least. Do your best or don't do it at all. Ask yourself this, are you proud of this work compared to other flashes around?
Reviews for "INVOCATION"
seriously man, put some volume controls in your videos
Your skill in animation leaves a lot to be desired. Compared to a lot of other animators, this is nothing special. In this day and age, I expect to see something better than this which should only be considered good by 2007 standards. As Kikoshou mentioned, the jank is distracting, and stuttering characters is distracting.
Now about this animations content. Nothing happened. What? Some kissing and fingering? That's it? You were building up to something and said fuck it right when it was showing promise. Not that your other content is much better considering it suffers from the same errors this one does.
Overall, I think you need to spend a lot more time honing your animation skills.
It was alright, as far as hentai goes, it's disappointing. There's almost no real action in it. Just kissing, fondling and him rubbing her crotch (which it doesn't really show). aside from her boobs, there's no nudity. the animation is decent. A lot of the scenes were the same thing repeated for longer than they should've been. I often felt like it was waiting on me to do something and continued watching because I was hoping it was going somewhere. it wasn't. Without any text to lead the story on there wasn't much drama or suspense. An intro explaining what she was doing with the book, or a small bit of dialogue (or any reaction on her part) could've set the mood. the comeding ending ruined any drama or suspense, and took a long drawn out video and ended it quickly and suddenly. If you wanted it to be dramatic, then the ending should've been different. If you wanted it light and funny then the beginning should've been different.
well this could be better.. the only nudity was the boobs and that's it, I'm sorry but I was disappointed and whatever that song was, really took it down.. way down.