The pacing was kinda slow, so I'd work on making the story and jokes go faster (It be less work for as well.) and the voices needed to sound louder, but great job. I see a lot of work went into this. Hope your series is awesome and improves.
Reviews for "We Are Witches - Mathilda Pilot"
wearewitches responds:
Thanks for the advice! totally agree, we gotta work on the pacing! and sound! and yes alot has! we'll definitely work on improving it as we go along :D
Looks great, but for non-native English speaker most of dialogue was hard tto understand. Please either add subs or upgrade your voice acting.
Also: so many cameos. Who can spot them all?
wearewitches responds:
Thanks for the suggestion on the subtitles! will definitely add those in the future!
and yes we'll also improve our voice acting!
yep alot of cameos!
Congrats on pulling the episode together. 13 minutes is a huge undertaking and it shows promise!
We're not sure if you caught our third part of the review on fb, so I'll link it here as well.
I even drew some fanart in there :D
http://stef-by-steph.tumblr.com/post/120770904940/we-are-witches-mathilda-pilot-a-review-part
A note to the people that follow this link.
This critique is an in depth, shot by shot and story breakdown that is meant to replicate the thoroughness of senior directors and animators. Stream Engine Studios is young in both it's creation and staff, so there's not a lot of experience to share and to go around when everyone is of young ages. Since I'm no longer a part of the show production wise I asked Skatoonist if I could critique thier work. He gave us the all we've got go signal and this is what Stefi Delly and myself could do to help contribute to help in making We are Witches the best it can be.
Best of luck to the crew with the next character pilot. From what I remember with Vivian, it's sure be a wonder filled episode :)