Hmm, artistic I guess?
Well, I'm glad at least some people are trying to be artistic. Don't forget though, that art is nothing without meaning. This movie had very little meaning to me, it was sparse, assuming, and poorly constructed. So ok, I guy is invisioning what his trip will be like, that's not much of a subject for art. However, say that it were for an instant, and just for the sake of arguement let's say that you captured it well. You are still lacking substance, with no humor, no action, no plot, no drama, no interaction, and "poor" meaning, that is all you are left with, a "poor" movie. I admire your effort and your talent, you are quite a good drawer. Next time you want to create something like this, try matching yourself up with an equally talented writer. Also, just some friendly advice, don't tell people that they need to "grow up" on your author comments, it doesn't make for constructive criticism. I have found that it's not that everyone on Newgrounds is a little child that can't understand simple metaphors, far from it, most viewers are quite intelligent and mature when they want to be. However, I, like many others don't log onto Newgrounds instead of going to a museum. I am not here for the art, I am here for the simple entertainment, a joke, a little game, a song, whatever it may be. So next time you are feeling artistic, why not paint something and send it to an art expo, you'll find a more receptive audience there, and a substantial amount of money. Good luck.
