..man, URGH. I hate needless math problems. please stop with the math. it takes you out of immersion. and that rule they tell you to stick by when you're learning English, about how never to use contractions? IGNORE THAT.
this game, for all its beautiful imagery, is like trying to save a drowning person, but first, you have to pick up a candlestick in Jersey. upside down, in a curtain. on a time limit. annoying! your first game was GOOD. this is... odd. The imagery is GREAT, but it feels like Second Life, InWorldz, and Inception had a threesome and the baby was named Yume Nikki.
one rule for oyu, breh, the most IMPORTANT RULE to RULE THEM ALL:
imagery is nothing when the audience cannot feel the magick of the trick working on them. in other words, suspension of disbelief is your FIRST priority; it affects everything you do from the moment you start your game. make it the base of your reality. KEEP GOING!!!!!!