I'm generally not a fan of those flash movies animated to a person talking about their life experience.
I seen way too many of those kinda movies and personally find that style of movie to be a bit formulaic.
This movie would not otherwise work without the described experience as audio being utilized.
Most of the humor about the tiny girl sneezing would have been lost in translation as a straight forward cartoon without narration.
The drawing style for most of this cartoon were basically chubby stick figures.
The guy telling the story within the video was the most polished character.
You could have built upon your other drawings to the same degree.
The overall movie could have used more backgrounds and color.
Generally, Graphics are the least important part of any movie because an unpolished cartoon can still be entertainment.
Your sound was clear and the recorded audio lacked hisses, pops and cracks.
You did an excellent job with sound.
The narration along with your animation combined to describe an otherwise mundane experience turned into a funny story.
I can see why others might enjoy this movie despite not liking the genre of the described experience cartoon.
In closing, I can see why others might enjoy this movie despite not liking it.
I may check out your other movies and try my best to give an indepth analysis.
- Mightydein