Not bad. Clunky in areas, but as time goes on and you gain experience I feel you get better at the small stuff.
Nice work on the shifting hair.
Although seriously that main character? A hot blonde flirts with you and you just walk away?
Dude forget the grapes, there is another low-hanging fruit to grab that looks very sweet to me.
Also props for being able to make an attractive female character with-out exaggerated features.