This movie displayed a lot of enthusiasm and has shown clear signs of effort.
I found the drawings to be a bit amateurish; However, your experiment with using multiple camera angles created a more polished movie.
Good strong poses help with creating lively animation.
You weren't afraid of making mistakes and learning from them.
If only more artists shown the very same lack of fear.
I hope this review provides you with useful criticism for future growth.
Keep up, the good work.
- Mightydein
Thanks!
And, yes, your constructive criticism is quite useful. I will not argue that there are quite a few animation flaws, but in my defense, I did start this project quite a while ago, and I definitely draw much different now. However, I wanted it to look consistent, so that's why I used the rather amateur drawing style I started with.
I really love the concept, especially since you were brave enough to come forward and create something with it. My only complaint is, obviously, the animation. It was scripted and acted superbly, and I can see some real potential in you. Keep it up dudebro.
Sorry I'm late (I barely check anymore), but thanks, bra ^-^
Animation isn't great, but the voice acting is pretty good, and so is the writing. Nice work :)
Thanks! ;)
The animation will hopefully be better in the second episode, because I started this a year and a half ago. XD