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Reviews for "Final"

Sorry, I have to give this a 2. Even though it is a final for your animation class you could have gotten some kind of purpose behind it. This is the equivalent of a rushed project.

You could have cut out the blood tears, they don't make sense. If you titled this video more appropriately or had the original concept be more closely tied to the video people would know what to expect from it, and I would have rated it higher.

jlboocker responds:

It's my first animation, and there are a lot of things I could have done differently. I was rushed, because I only had a week to do it, and I am also a single father with a full time job. The "blood tears" are supposed to be him getting angry, but I didn't know how to properly show him turning red. As far as the title, I honestly didn't think about it. To be honest, I'm surprised anyone rated this, let alone seven or eight others. I appreciate any and all feedback, so don't be sorry. I really do appreciate it. Thanks for taking the time to view and comment.

I'd say the art could use some work, but I actually think the animation is solid. Sound is always a good thing though. Keep working on it!

jlboocker responds:

This was my first animation. I used Flash for everything, which isn't the greatest for drawing in. Since this was for school, we haven't gotten to the point of adding audio in. Thanks for the response, I appreciate it.