It was interesting until it turned out to be a dang DEMO, you could have mentioned that.
Luckily it's a demo however because your novel needs some proof-reading.
It was interesting until it turned out to be a dang DEMO, you could have mentioned that.
Luckily it's a demo however because your novel needs some proof-reading.
thanks gergaloth, if you can point out the typos or grammatical errors, it's appreciated.