Reviews for tales of abushu episode 1

[GenesonSimmons]

-Squuuuuueal-

Oh god it's a moeblob. <->

On a little more serious of a note... I like the animation, even if it is simple. The outlines around everything give it that sort of storybook feel, and so does the narrator. I did like that little burst of flowers, though! It looked nice, but I missed on the first time watching.

It is very cute, but I think a little bit more of a background (Lollipops are popular. You could draw sweet pea green hills, and stuff, I feel like it would make the animation better.)

The voice might need to go along a little more smoothly with the animation, the little pauses are weird. (Maybe in those you could make an animation of flipping a page.)

Other than that, a sweet surprise.

SuperWoof responds:

i couldn't do much about the narration since i picked it up the audio from work done by kinenz 3 months ago.
i found the narration to be a little fast paced in some places so that one scene got all explosive and chaotic.
thank you for your ideas (>'o'<) wow! sweat peas :3
although, it might be a little difficult doing the page fllipping thing. i only have adobe flash cs6 so there is a limit to what i can do with my animation. at least until i can afford other editting programs.