first off, whoever Xtrullor is, I'd probably stop working with them.
so much clashing sounds, no kind of apparent frequency placement at all with any of the instruments.
the clipping artifacts in your "mix" are laughing at me.
the percussion itself is punchy, yet still lacks some vibrancy, maybe eq the highs on the kik/snare a bit.
the bass is pretty full, but whatever presets you used for the rest are kind of garbage bro. real shit, dont ever use a straight preset, it's just toy shit and cheap. you gotta at least tweak it a little or else you get all these cookie cutter sounds, and honestly no amount of chorus or flanger or phasers are gonna make a shitty preset go god mode.
the idea itself got kind of lost in translation I feel, but thats more of a reason for you to move forward and focus on channeling those ideas properly.
def not the worst, very much potential, not terrible to do the bernie to, just not a club banger either.
it's fun, crazy energetic music, and not everyone can deliver that, so props on that.
really i think you just need to focus on your details bro, maybe look up some music theory and most of all: keeping doing what you love, dont ever stop and always learn from yourself.
NXSLEEP
you are the teacher and the student homie. good job.