I could stand to see a few more of these. Slightly too much video for NG, but that's easily forgivable.
Did you meet the owners before doing any of these ads? A little research goes a long way, in getting a good, airable (for TV/local origination) commission. Couldn't help but think there was a way the burglar could've had knife marks already in him (digital masking, up until the stabbing began)... there's always a plethora of cat skinning ways, even optical ones. Eh, forgive my armchair quarterbacking, it's a decent ad!
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AlantheBOX responds:
well you're in luck! i just uploaded another one!
Y'know, I'd definitely buy their donuts if I saw this commercial on TV at two in the morning. Nothin' says "mmmmmm donuts!" like violent stabbings.
Haha...because stabby deaths make people hungry for donuts :P ...it was kinda cool on the real though and nice of you to offer up free work without any self-promotion at all.
If you mailed them anonymously, then they don't have your mailing address. Some places don't have a website to send e mails to.
*after watching the video*
Yeah I can't imagine why they didn't call back. I would want my mascot to be remembered as the donut that stabbed a burglar 10 times in the chest and spat donuts in his face.