I suck at reviewing.
i can't get past the momentum of the game, it really ruins everything and the flow of the levels is terrible.
Design isn't art, design is the choices the author makes in creating the game. Things mechanics, level layout, and difficulty curve.
A generic game that even you agree is terrible. Why even post it when you already know what people are already going to think? I rather see a game that you actually put some thought into, some effort into, not something that is unpolished and is no different than the millions of other terrible games out there that are only meant to say "look, I made a game! It's terrible, but it's a game". Put more effort, and creativity into it. Focus on your strengths, if your terrible in another area - or work to improve that weakness.
Can't even play it. I got past the first level and i just get a white screen.