Such a great concept; the camera work and effects were nice looking.
To make this a little more successful I would take more time to refine the stick figures. Add some more defined lighting, shadows, and expression. Clean up the artwork and add a few more inbetweens in the animation.
Interesting story, although it was easy to get lost with out a re-watch.
If you take more time to refine these few things you could have a really great series on your hands!