Ah, iv'e got to pretend i'm not crying. Such a wonderful novel. The characters had more depth than most other GNs i have read. I only had a minor hiccup on Yuki's final scene. Other than that, i'm glad i read this through.
Reviews for "The Other Side"
Loving it so far, like your other stories. There's one issue though: Yuki's chapter stops during a bit of dialogue, and pressing S does nothing. There isn't even a name in the dialogue box. Is there a way around this?
I'm confused.How did Sakuya die and who was that person who called to Shoji?
Other than that this game is really good,I was holding in the tears
Um. I was reading through it, and then I just got stopped at the part (SPOILER) yuki and shoji kissed. Then it wouldn't progress any further. It was stuck. I like the game, and the plot line though. 9/10
It crashes in Yuki's part.
I managed to get it working though.
Now the review:
Visual novel is good, very good thing.
The gameplay - disabled, this is visual novel.
You should add a warning though, some people don't understand this type of art.
The story - The story was neat, though some things weren't explained - like who organises this world, does it have any superiors? How do they know they are supposed to be in group with each other?
The music - fitting, quite neat.
The visuals - Now that is it. They are rather weak. Seriously. You should work more on this.
What you did was taking some images, making low-quality animelike portraits and just combined them over and over again. I'm not asking you to make full-length 3D movies, but please try to make more images to use. What I really disliked was that some of the "pasts" hadn't any visual and some did. Basically, it's supposed to be a visual novel, not a text novel. The actions happening in < > should have corresponding pictures of them, at least. I would love to see you improve.
What are character models?
I could maybe help in some way.
Typo - in some moment in Yuki's ending, there is "hoji" instead of "Shoji"