Reviews for Newgrounds (basically)

[Doomslr]

good introduction, but needs better animation

[joeartguy]

This could have been much better. The sound level was low, and a lot more could have been done with the animation even without doing better art. Also, factual error: 0 is the lowest possible rating, not 1.

V-lord responds:

Thanks for the criticism, Im going to try to improve on the those factors

[SpeedFreak1992]

You need to speak up and use better audio. I liked the animations and drawings. However, your voice needs to be clear and you need to speak up in a more audible and intelligible voice. The video should be a little longer as well.

V-lord responds:

Thanks, I'll be working on that in the future.