The piece seems unnecesarily dark. Maybe try tonning up lights.
I recommend.
Reviews for "ThisActuallyHappensALot"
very well done your style kida reminds me of the sunday comics i used to read as a kid & i look forward to seeing some of your future work
technically fine but I cannot put myself into this. Somehow real though, so 4 Stars anyways
Welcome to the sunny side.
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