Nice try.. :D
Reviews for "Modern Madness (English)"
Paspartan1 responds:
Thanks!
Good animation.. but everybody walks slowly.
Paspartan1 responds:
Yep, I need to doing more fps.
pretty good, this movie meets all madness combat requirements, but if you would want more stars, try to add in a few more frames to make it smoother, everything is PERFECT!
will be excited to be seeing future ones
Good job, it was just too slow
Not bad, but it can improve a lot:
Steps and shoting are too slow and pretty rough, making it a little unpleasant to see
Sudenly appearing on opened doors it's weird, instead place the characters behind the door while opning it, so the characters actually go through the door and not just teleporting
Constant talking doesn't match the madness style very well, especially the "You're okay?", it just doesn't match madness
Sudden scene changes are just no good, it dissorients the viewer about what's happening, if you want to change the scene at least put a 1 second black trasition
and also don't make the characters stay totally still, make then slightly move something, the head, a hand, a foot, someting so the don't look like frozen in time