This is quite exceptional work for a lone animator. A great way to make the animation more consistent and smooth is to omit entire details altogether. Look at the works of Aaron Douglas for example. He puts a lot of emotion in his characters without drawing a face on any of them. It's all about working smarter instead of working harder.
Reviews for "Extraction"
Kel-chan responds:
I have a secret- It's 3D
I'm experimenting with using motion capture so I can retain quality and detail whilst making something look more 2D than 3D
It was a nice animation, like some people have stated, the animation felt a bit choppy, maybe if more time was spent on it, it might've been able to be more smooth in motions, she reminds me on dante with the gun skills, I would've also like a bit more story and more action, you have the skills and I do believe with more time you will be able to create something that runs smoothly.
I know how long it takes to create an animation especially when using 3d but as long as you take time with a project then you will be able to create something awesome, so going to keep an eye on you :)
It was good i liked it. Nice effort also
Animation was not so smooth and everything felt like it was taken from somewhere else and put together.
Still... Not bad at all.
I also now know how to get smooth legs!(Damn ads)
Haha! The girl kinda reminds me of Makoto Kikuchi from IDOLM@STER but anyways lets get to reviewing, Okay the graphics are mediocre the animation is kinda rubbish but it's pretty nice.
Keep it going
-ihatebeer (Hunter B. Stewart)