This is the same chord progression of the opening to The Office, making this song sound like an electronic cover of the song. What made it sound even more like the opening to The Office were those three or four notes from the piano leading from the IV-chord to the I-chord at the end of each section… Unless that was the point of this piece of music, I would suggest finding a different lead-in. Otherwise, great job, I really liked it.
Reviews for "Soutfast - Dancing Cloud"
Awesome song, I really like it! :D I suck at writing reviews, so I don't really know what else to say. Keep up the good work! ;)
Soutfast responds:
It's okay, at least you said you liked it which means a lot to me. Thanks!
This song is overall very well done! Nice job. I love the percussion especially, it's very nice. Personally, I love the transition at around 1:15, it's very smooth. The only thing that could be different is if you were to not outline the chords so strictly, it kind of makes the song seem 'blocky'. (Might just be me though XD) I also have trouble with that, and it's really not a big deal. Good work, keep it up!
Soutfast responds:
Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah, I have problems with making chords and notes going well together, I'll try to keep that in mind when making music.
I really like the percussion too - simple but works nicely.