Really good submission. What stood out was the great music, not any flaws or errors. Some things to improve: make sure the drawings look ok. If you look at 0:06, where he is kneeling, you can see a black line extending from his wing, not part of his body. Also work on the number of drawn cells, I'd say make the fighting longer and more involved, this is what really shines, is the fluid motion of the characters. Overall this 'toon worked well for me as entertainment. I might reccommend this to my friends if was hooked into the characters development.
Reviews for "Yasuo Tales: Prologue"
Shho responds:
Thanks! I actually worked pretty long on the music. Somehow I never noticed the line on 0:06 haha. Thanks, Really great crit!
It turned out great (Other than that black line at the beggining, the one coming off his arm).
I'm left a bit curious where this took place however, the forest just seemed to be put there for background XD
I find that the animation is adequate, could be worked with but seems to be alright and swift, the voice acting seems to be fine as well, though it could help to make it more dynamic rather than monotonous. Now as for the story itself, while it does leave a few questions and ideas that could potentially leave the viewer wanting more if done right, it doesn't seem to be really captivating, it leaves you wondering "what was the crime?" "how or why was it pinned on him" "why did hid friends turn against him?" but the overall atmosphere seems dull and leaves much more to be desired, you should try making it more intriguing next time if you want your audience to desire more of the series.