I think you should make this more interactive so there'll be less dialogue. You should go back and add color too. I'd make this one better then do a second one. But either way I'd play more of games.
Reviews for "Detetctive Kita"
I was bored in the first 5 minutes
Though you made a slight mistake... Why are there no traces of blood at the fingerprint scanner? If the criminal did use her hand to get in, the scanner should have blood on it or at least some... Overall the story is nice... Make another one if you could that is. This game made my day, thank you.
Not a bad novel
The art definitely need to improve but i don't mind about that
What is needed is music
The story is predictable to me so not special from other novels
Then i readed "I've learned from Phoenix Wright" that must have been the reason :P
The first time i met the cool,act smart person i knew it would be him
Enough about that
The red blood in the game logo could be added in the game
Since it's black and white add some red and it's going to look great (For murder scene)
I love mystery novel but this aren't that great however i enjoyed it
I like the direction it was taking but it could have been more thought provocative and challenging than it was. The artwork could definitely use alot of work, but I rather like the black and white style. Also if you do plan to make a sequel please note to maybe add some music to it. Keep these tips in mind and i think your next game should make more of an impact than this, but not bad for a first try.