I'm curious how just 3 strangers can defeat all of humanity. The strangers only conquered them with trust, and some kind of mind control, along with the fact that there was a lot more of them back then. At this point though, humanity hates the strangers now, humanity may have something to fight back at them, and there are very few of them. How can they possibly have any chance of winning? Good animation, good voice acting, however the story plot seems to have a few holes here and there.
Reviews for "The Eyes of a Stranger"
"In triumph, man had a grade-A party, which lasted for more than 2,000 years, with regular potty breaks."
Was that in there just to see if we were still paying attention?
Cool animation. No clue what was going on with the story, but it seemed like a set-up for a whole series.
I don't mind expositing the story through a narrator, but by having active dialogue beneath it at the same time is a big no-no...it becomes difficult to focus when two people are speaking at once, and it happens often enough that its easy to lose interest. Its like having an audio book playing in the background that you can't stop while you're trying to figure out whats happening visually.
Either pause the narration in between the characters lines, or completely separate them from each other. It won't clutter it up for the audience.
The character animation looked great, its a shame this ain't finished but at least you put yourself out there with a proof of concept. I'd like to this continued! Lets see what happens. Let the audience find out who this girl is, what this place is, the significance of the heiroglyphs, and actively involve the audience in the discovery of this mysterious, bandaged entity.
It would be valuable to practice SHOWING the audience these things...show, don't tell. You're dabbling with a visual media, and you don't want to bore your audience with the silky smooth (well voice acted) narration... think about how you could visually interpret EVERYTHING that narration talked about. Try condensing the dialogue, y'know?
Hope that helps. Keep up the great work.
Could be better. It is like 25% of the story. where is the rest? Also, why are the strangers so ugly? As it seems these strangers are something like old egiptian gods, heh?