There are many problems with the game and since the others aren't being specific enough, I will be.
Glitches
- The description says the game should end on day 7, yet I made it to Day 9 and I can continue going.
- Every single day, I end up in debt and yet there has been no game over (I never could seem to get enough money)
Problems
- I think it is good that you added a tutorial, but it doesn't properly explain everything.
- It does not for who and when I should hit the emergency button to bring the security bots.
- It does not state what to do when a robots says it "forgot its card" or "is at the wrong desk"\
- The goals and objectives should be stated at the beginning of the tutorial, not the end.
- A video demonstration of what needs to be done in the tutorial would also be helpful.
- What's the point of having two sides to the card (not to mention the robots always handing it to you so you have to flip it)? With this set up, whenever I try to compare the facts on the card and on the computer screen readout, I have to move the screen, flip the card, and then hover my mouse over it to physical compare them. This is tedious and could have been made simpler.
- the mail system also suffers from problems. When I click on the mail icon when there is new stuff, the mail should pop open. Instead, a hexagon pops up with a small mail icon.
- The text with the robots trying to convince you to let their corrupted friends through should be skippable because I really don't care what they have to say.
- You should make the manual that you can click on and activate smaller because I keep accidentally clicking on it. Also, I don't think it is necessary to have it pop up after every level.
- Like others have pointed out, the game is repetitive and boring. You could have made this thing fast paced and made it so you have to do a certain number of robots a day (even though that technically is an option in this case, how it is now feels more sluggish). Even the loading speed is sluggish.
- Although I haven't played the game they are referring to, even if this game has a different story, if it has many of the same qualities of the game they are mentioning and you didn't bother mentioning that game as inspiration or a guide then yes, this is a rip off and plagiarism. You need to give credit, where credit is due.
Still, the game does seem interested. I hoped you'll keep making games in the future.