ATTENTION: Constructive critism ahead, if you're in a bad day, just don't read.
I really loved the smoothness and that funny "No" part, but this was too short, also how the heck that hotdog got there without a scratch?
What to improve: just more coherence at the script and patience to make the movie longer.
I'm sorry, but just 2.5 stars
Keep going, and when you make a real movie I can give true five stars to you ;D