Luigi take a gun, shoot and kill kirby and... thaht all?!!!.... not funny, not amazing, boring and uncool, 1 star for the animation, that all!!!!!
Reviews for "Luigi Death Stare"
The good: half decent lighting, light effect when gun is fired, mist on road, change of setting from original video
The bad: back wheels not moving (That's more of NG's fault for having a perpetually broken reupload system), barely any content, slow as crap, luigi lighting pop-in at 0:02, no camera easing, bad camera angle at end, ultra low effort, unconvincing physics, and you didn't modify the premade models at all.
I'm rating this to give you a few ideas on how to improve. And if you just threw this vid together for kicks then don't worry about this review.
Alot of work can be done to improve your future flash submissions. Take notes. Good showing for just an hour of putting together though.
weird
So... this is a random clip where Luigi shoots kirby in a drivethrough whilst over-the-top, unneccesairily R-rated rap blasts at the background...
I really think you're pushing the whole 'gangsta' thing to hard dude.
The animation is terribly lacking, the characters feel plastic, the pace is numbingly slow, effects are cheesy and downright lacking, story is... just not there...
The wheels aren't spinning, ALL the action is off-screen (I think FleetAdmiralTony likes the new Godzilla movie) and there's no recoil on the shot.
If this weren't on the frontpage, I would've given this a higher rating, but this being on the frontpage is quite frankly put ridiculous.
I ain't got nothing 'gainst ya dawg, you's goin' da right direction, know I'm sayin', but this just ain't crackin' dawg! Ya feel me?
FleetAdmiralTony responds:
i really didnt expect this to be frontpage.....thats why i didnt really comit to this video. but i understand what you mean, thanks for the honesty <3
"the pace is numbingly slow" ...Because i made it slow-mo my friend