Congradulations for being the first cartoon featured in the NATA round! I think these will be better than those games. Cartoons would be easier to make than games, I would think. Pony POV is actually the name of a very popular MLP fanfic. If only you'd referenced that with the brony joke. The voices were quite good too.
While some of it didn't make sense, it was still lots of fun. It really was quite unpredictable. Aren't most people bronies nowadays? The animation moved rather fluidly in this. I really did find this to be a unique idea. I'm glad we started the NATA round with this.