That was quite good, but it was too short. I especially appreciated the animation in this. It was really nice to see how detailed everything was. You told a good story without any words. Not many people can do that. I just love the backgrounds.
It was weird to see the more cartoonish looking people. Well, they were just drawn differently. I wasn't expecting that guy with the gun. This was pretty unpredictable. It's still hard to put together.
i loved the background scenery. very nice piece
thanks
Amazing scenery but the story is so silly, a childish idealism.
im not sure about other artists, but i sometimes bring up themes i dont fully agree with. I have other views on respect for dead, but that doesnt mean i cant see something good or beatifull in other point of views.
you on other hand, should take others views on life more lightly.
Back ground and scenery is great, but the animation is still young and some sounds were innacurate, like the time he took a step on concrete but sounded like a hollow metal tile.
yeah, i kinda had some practice with the static art before. But im kinda novice to animation, thats mostly why im going to compete in nata.
Nice setting, the art for the backgrounds were pretty good. Sound effects added to it, too. would have loved some ambient bgms though.
I get the story, it has a nice premise.
The beginning started out great, it built up the anticipation for the rest of the story.
The interaction with the gang could have been better, it felt like an arranged meeting instead of a shakedown (or was it supposed to be that way?). Would have preferred for the old man to show reluctance in giving up the bag, since the candle inside was related to what was "Most Important".
Ending was ok; I liked the art for the photo. Though it was hard to establish an emotional connection with the scene, for me as a viewer. Might need more details on how close she is to the old man.