not bad
i see where you are going with this. you know some improvements and changes need to be made but i understand your decisions. i like how you broke it down into different parts. maybe you are limited on your art, but the egg like characters could be better if they were soupped up a little. but everything seems real nice so far. post the others, i wouldnt mind finishing watching this to see what happens...
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art: looked solid for the most part, there was times when it looked as though you rushed it.. lacked in style but it was good.
sound: what sound? i didnt use to mind text for speech but as movies have improved on NG i have come to expect sounds, not good enough.
you have potential and if i get time i will be looking at your other work.
Just some Kirby look-a-like's...
To bad it hasn't got sound in it.
What the...?
Well...it has potential. I don't think I can handle the Mr. Potato-heads on crack though...