funny and not bad.Next time you should make it longer i was enjoying it.
Reviews for "Wormholes"
shadowtoon responds:
Thanks! I did wanted to make it longer, but I'll admit that I wanted to upload something just for the heck of it :D
I'll work on making my next animations longer, so thanks for the support!
very good for your very first animated short :)
shadowtoon responds:
Thank you very much! I'll try to work on more
Absolutely hilarious. Your voice acting needs work, but this shows you have great potential.
shadowtoon responds:
Thank you! I'm glad you thought it was funny! I don't think I have much talent in comedy, but maybe I actually do. Do you have any tips for voice acting? I'm kinda shy in front of the mic and such.
Awww, you have so much promise as an animator. Make it longer than 13 seconds next time, won't you. In the first couple of seconds, the lip sync seems off (which might be due to the video player.) I like the fluidity of the characters and how you animated details of their facial expressions and how the story changed from moment to moment. You have a nice voice, too. Would vote higher if longer than 13 seconds.
shadowtoon responds:
Thank you! I'm trying to overcome my shy nature of showing my funny side through animating. I kinda rushed with this though to see what people would think of my skills as an animator. Glad to know that you see potential in me! I'll definitely try to pay attention more to the lip sync and make my future toons longer. You think I have a nice voice? Thanks! I guess I could use some practice in acting though.