part of the text gets hidden behind the RPG Playground logo.
there isn't much do to in this game, it's essentially just an easy maze with people to talk to and some nice graphics.
try putting more interaction in the game, like having to solve puzzles in order to get further, being able to pick up and use items etc.
also, once I reached the girl, nothing happened, I could talk to her, she thanked me, but I was still walking around, and the people still thought she was lost.
I'll give you 2 stars for graphics, music and idea, but for it to be an actual, proper game, I'd suggest you'd make it more interesting with the suggestions I've made, and perhaps you'll score better next time!