he has left us alone but shafts of light....
...sometimes grace the corner of our rooms... thats what i woulda called it. i think everythings already been said about this one, well nice mate
;ped
Reviews for "RWBPTSA"
pitbulljones responds:
Thats a cracking title that mate, i'll nick that for another tune. lol. well yea for the very concise and explanortory review XD
Thanks mate
pitters
sweeeeeet
so calm..and soothing...and ooohh the panning XD very good work on this song XD I loved the pads and the way they were used XDD good stuff. 5/5 10/10
Thanks for your vote, Twistedtechnology! You voted 5 for RWBPTSA, raising its score from 4.00 to 4.08.
pitbulljones responds:
Hey thanks man, glad you liked the track, the panning in this track is nothing exceptional, you'll notice my tracks are hit or miss, but i findif you have a paning setup the best way to tell if they fit right is to switch your monitor off close your eyes and listen t the track, you'll notice whether bits are right or not. Glad you enjoyed the track.
pitters
oh thanks for the 5
Hey really mellow tune here man!
Wow this is a really chilled piece of tranquility you got here man! not a lot going on with this, but then that's the whole point else it won't be so damn chilled! yeah I liked this it was sweet!
towards the end i was kinda expecting at that point for some beats to kick in as it seemed to be heading that way, it was all geared up that way i thought anyway!
Oh well man I'm gonna have a listen to some of your indie now too whilst i'm here
Hit me back man! I'd like to see what you think of some of my tunes
Peace Out!
Stealth
pitbulljones responds:
Thanks for the review mate. Yea i was gonna add more stuff to this track like drums and more layers but it started detracting from what my intentions were. I think it could go for a beat, i was thiking it myself, some fast breaks or trip-hop but i cudnt find a nice set of samples to work with so i played safe. Of course i'll bob by your page and give you some reviews.
thanks again.
pitters
A really...
...smooth little piece right here, man!
Definitley moody and chilled out, just the way I like it.
Pieces like this is difficult to critisise, since it´s what you want that really matters, if u know what I mean... I could go in and say that "you should have introduced some kindof beat bl bal bal" but that would have made a totally different song.
I did expect a beat to arrive tho, but hell this is sweet as it is.
A technical issue I can bring up though :)
Some of the sounds seem to mask each other quite some. I think you definitley should check your EQ a little, and try to "puzzle" the sounds together better. Very important on a song like this that you use all of the 3-d specturm of the sound between the speakers (up-down = frequencie, left right and forth - back volume). You dod have some panning and good stuff going on, but try and see if ya can "release" the instruments even more!
There is always room for improvement, whoever made the song, but i really gotta try hard to foind something here.
IMO a beat would have been good, even if it would have been a subtle klick or whatever.
Great job though man, im gonna try to greview my friends music a lil more... but im gonna be stuck with that dial up now and then >:(
Peace!
newgrounds: pitbulljones strikes back!!!
i am drunk ATM but your soud is still great to listen to ( not the old always repeating bullcr@ap on newgrounds - it's just my taste- ) , but this is really good to listen to , timless or something , well , bye