It is pretty cool, I am not much of a VN fan but I can still appreciate what you did here. I think the main criticism I have is that sometimes the jaggies of the forground art can be a bit jarring against the background, maybe try more AA or make the art at a higher res? I really lime the music and some of the backgrounds are quite pretty. Keep up the good work!
Also: ignore the people giving you 0 star reviews and not even telling you why, their are a few people like that on every game
Engaging story, good use of visuals, good music. A few typos which distract from the story-telling, but nothing I couldn't overlook. The bug in day 4 that makes it impossible to advance is frustrating, but I got through after a few tries. The whole thing is a really interesting look into how depression and suicidal ideation work vs. reality. It's kind of weird that the ending you don't die in is the downer, but that's a twist I liked.
The bug in day 4 seems to relate to the fade-in/out effect. I'd take a guess that you're accepting keyboard input before you're ready to deal with advancing the black backdrop to the lecture hall backdrop, and it's messing with dialogue loading.
makes to little sense.
Aside from a few errors in the narrative context it was an engaging story and I thought I would be bored with it but I wanted to see how it ended. Very nice! Maybe to hook your audience a bit more, make it possible to advance the text with the mouse- easier on the arms.
not really into visual novels but this was really great.