Animation was too jumpy
Like the reviewer before me said, the animation was too jumpy. You got the basics down though. keep practicing and you may make a masterpiece someday.
Reviews for "My First Movie"
Not a bad first attempt
But the animation was too jumpy and a skate video isn't the best choice. But keep working at it, you're a whole hell of a lot better than most of these people out here.
nice job
try to make more frames, it realy jumps in places
but i can tell you put more time into this then some other people
I liked it!
Heyyy, not too shabby! You said this was your first flash entry? Nice work. Your frame by frame really work really pays of because it gives this movie an immense amount of style. Your sounds are right on the nose with great timing. Great first entry! Keep it up the good work.
that went fast!!!!
the problem is that you did it frame by frame,and it went fast,it's a different approach...it's alright i guess...but anyone can create what you made..keep trying and you'll figure it out..but until that day don't put stuff like this here it's just not worth seeing...make something better...longer..add some story,sound and some good animations and your set..i make banners and intros for sites and it took me a while to get the hang of it...sooner or later you'll get a spot on the top 50{maybe}