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well, in the intro theres nothing wrong with the song, but perhaps could you replace the slayer with some strings or somthing and remove the odly macarina reminescent drums, the part with the spanish guitar is cool, in my opinion this song would be better suited to ambient, but it seems liek it was ambient originally and you just synth overdosed on it, sorry if that sound slike im being negative, dont take it that way, i mean its a great song its just i ono it sounfds kind of like music that be playin in a clothing store its got liek drive but like false emotion, i ono, like i sounds like i coul be raved to but at the same time sounds very flat, sorry for the bad review, im just really picky about stuff like that
but still its a great song, im just a tone whore