I like stories that feature the Stable Time Loop. He really was an a**hole! I could tell what was going to happen when he came back. I mean, who else would that other guy be? Of course, this raises a lot of questions in itself. I'm not going to go all scientific here.
I thought this was quite well done. RicePirate, you are on fire! And it's not just that you do voices, you produce whole cartoons! I appreciated how well drawn this was. He deserves to die.