Darkside555 - Chaos
First Impression; "This could be good."
I like some of your idea's, however I feel this tune is far too unstable and just kinda run me down with sound. I like metal alot, and your second part of this was really great, but I'm not the biggest fan of your "second" riff.
It's pretty much an ok tone, could need a bit mixing to make the guitar sound "closer" if you know what I mean.
Your percussionate works, well, works.
It's in all basic well set and everything, but there's just something about this song I can't put my finger on that I dislike about it.
You're still among the best submitters at NG when it comes to the metalsection, but this isn't your strongest piece.
-Chris