Reviews for Lulanda Demo 2

[Serverclosed]

I fallen through the floor in the map of drills, when start the map, in direction to the exit.

[MrOssis]

Things were all right until I've fallen through floor =)

Otherwise, excellent start.

WilliamPellen responds:

Oh man, really?! Whereabouts?

[plush-toy]

if you ever got anywhere with this it probably be a sidestory and costume for another game... it wasnt bad though

WilliamPellen responds:

Sidestory and costume for another game?? What does that mean?

[azureda]

The UI and graphics look truly excellent in this game.

However, your storytelling is a little too deliberate. It would be easily possible to let novice gamers understand the principle of the game without the need for expository dialogue like that.

This very good article talks about some stuff like that: http://www.gamasutra.com/view/feature/3408/the_cabal_valves_design_process_.php

WilliamPellen responds:

Thanks for the link! I erred on the simpler side because it's just a demo, and normally a few levels would come before it that would introduce mechanics a bit more organically. It is definitely something that's tricky to balance!

[kozinc]

Well, it looks like it should be a pretty good game, once you make it. :)