Reviews for Seb's Adventure 2

[ghettoflower]

Not a bad effort. I like the levels.. and.. did that text just run away from me? So much more could be done with this, yet, so much is already done right here. You may or may not get the nodded approval i've given from other users, but this is very nice. I like the fades of detail. The way the levels work is a bit glichy, the way you hug a side and it restarts. I'm sure there's gotta be a way to evade that.. maybe make the ceilings higher in your frames/levels/whatnot. Perhaps more filler is needed, but it's your world and I thank you for allowing me to play it. You've done the world a great service, I only expect you to excel beyond that is already here. But don't let it go to your head and it'll come naturally.

Also the ending screen. I presume is the end. Maybe really letting the user know that would be an effect. It is a wonderful scenario, and while i should take some half stars out, I'll give them back knowing that the hot dog is the part of the plot. That's what's essential here. Great efforts, and good output. 5/5

[JMac96]

im surprised you made a sequel to this because the last one didnt turn out as well and neither did this one honestly but you did make improvements like this one had more backgrounds like the office corps. i wouldnt mind at all if you made 10 of these. just improve where you can and dont be shy when asking for help or suggestions on the newgrounds forums. hope this helps

[superomochao7]

good platform

sebastian4ester responds:

thx

[Plasmarift]

Thanks for the shoutout, man! I see you've made some improvements. The music at the beginning was a good touch and the text running away mechanic was good as well (I'd suggest reading bcunderscore's comment about four comments below mine. He's got a lot to say). As for suggestions, try this.
- If you can't change the mechanic where if you go above the ceiling, you have to restart, try placing a small amount of platform near the ceiling that covers it, so that the character will just bounce off of it.
- If you're looking for more music, you can go through the audio portal on newgrounds for some. You're allowed to use it as long as you give credit to the artist, just make sure it fits the game.
- I like that you made Seb smaller. It made navigation a little tougher so it was good, but try using a smaller writing tool for the mouth next time so it doesn't look like a black blob from far away.
- On the last level, I didn't think I was going anywhere since the background didn't change at all. I'd suggest creating some kind of indication of movement (however, this may just be due to stupidity on my own part so don't worry about it too much :)
- On the next game, try creating a few more difficult jumps or perhaps a section of the game where the screen is slowly moving upper and if you don't stay above it, you have to start over. (Just an idea).

If I get the time, I'm going to start looking into the Stencyl program more to see what it is cable of. That way, I can give better reviews. I look forward to your next game!

sebastian4ester responds:

OK THX 4 DA REVIEW

[SkullsJR]

like the first, seb's adventure is entertaining, but it failed to fix the problems it had in the first game. you die when you touch the edges of the screen, and seb's outline isn't defined, making wall-jumping and some platforms hard to land on. but the controls are still tight as ever. seb's adventure 2 is okay if you take it for what it is.

sebastian4ester responds:

thanks