Neat! This reminds me also "Heavy metal". Hope you finish the short later adding also the audio.
The character and color design were interesting, even the "bad guy" looked good and I like to imagine him now as a burning skeleton raging with the fire of revenge or something as badass that would call for some good old metal on flames. hahaha
Keep it up
Interesting. Your English could use work though. If you don't know the language too well, perhaps have someone help you with writing the characters lines.
not bad, def need some sound effects and music, and i don't know about your english.. it kinda off...
I believe the artist made a mistake there is no audio in this animation. Please fix and update. Animation seems to have future, but there are some issue with the english captions. Maybe you could get a translator to do the work for you.
I don't recommend this as you will get frustrated watching it.
A good start but lacking sound, we have to read or watch. Also no replay button.