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hey speedmetal!
I never thought i'd see a classical from you. It's quite strange to see really! Anyways onto the song.
Deflektor (I believe) mentioned something about the samples, I agree with him. Their quality diminishes the power of the piece.
Some ideas.
The buildup to the brass is nice, but I felt the brass came in too abruptly.
Also when the brass does jump in, perhaps some deep cellos in the background to fill in the lower spectrum?
To end the piece, I would suggest a trailing note, fading out you know, the ending was a tad abrupt as well.
Anyways, for your first classical piece, I must say i'm damn impressed. You have inspired me to try my hand at metal now ;). I hope you will be there to hear it when it's out.
Keep up the good work speed, keep them coming!