This is a very great animation. But I don't get the part where she stands on the clock, it really makes no sense. The noise is mostly silence, the part where she got shocked by lightning as a filly really didn't have much movement. The art was detailed as if they look almost like the characters in MLP:FiM. I suggest to start watching more Movies to get your inspiration going. And maybe make a series for a try, it gives you good practice, and more ways to create art into a beautiful image of animation. But other than all of that, it's very great. 5 Stars for the animation.