you really brought the message with this. the drawings weren't bad either. i am pretty surprised by the quality (even tough it is "just a doodle"). But you know what they say: the beauty is in the simplicity of things (or something like that, i'm not english btw :) ). Voice acting was pretty good. and indeed it has something from game grumps but that doesn't mean that it is copyrighted.
i give you a 3.5/5 because i see it is your third drawing and you are improving (even tough this is made in just 2 hours, it could become something if you really worked on it. (i saw the easter-egg btw :) )
all the best,
thethinker.