Reviews for Study in the park

[DeviantRiver]

Noticed that the cat girl's hair leaves her head, near the split in her hair. Threw me off, makes me think she's wearing a wig-may want to consider fixing. Also the way the cat girl's ankles seem nailed to the bench seems weird to me. I wish there was more use of depth in the bench at least, but the bench makes a nice subtle transition between the fore and background. Lastly I think it would a great affect if you made the bench move with each thrust. Loved your use of light to depict the body motion, would of loved to see some in the hair.

Overall: Good, but not great
I am sorry, but that miss with the hair...this was a commission and you left that in?
-(mind you, I have no idea what you charged)
On the plus side : smooth animation, loved use of lighting, and nice music
that almost syncs well with the loop.

Hope to see more, as you gain experience.

[berwady]

Smooth animation! the loop is flawless. I would love it if the background would dance and be all wibbly wobbly with the music, I have it cranked to 100 on both the flash, and headfphones, and I can tell you on this running on sentence, that I'm headbanging to it. A little color, some plant life to give the back ground oozing with dazzling tang would make it so much more feature'ish. The red can and green bright green arms are a welcome to the background scenery, but I think a couple budding flowers would do wonders for making it pretty.

The girl that is receiving; I noticed that there is a part just as the (lizard wearing armor/robot?) is about to thrust that her tit drag appears to jump in motion. The breast makes the loop apparent, although, I don't think it could have been helped. Regardless, his was a fantastic animation, and I enjoyed it. Thank you.

[Jacklary]

Is that girlXgirl or what?

[captaingrundy]

nice like it bt wtf? no end and eitherthat chick has a dick or that dude has tits

[patrickliberty]

lol ramming it..