Well ok
Alright so this was a nice little toon you have going on here you really pushed some nice ideas with this one and made things work and made some nice animation here charchter was good you should really think about adding some real voice work into this one because that voice used was just not fitting to everything so some improved voices is my suggestion everything else is really good with this piece here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Use some natrual voices
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great animation...
great animation but whyd you get steven hawking to do the gangster style voices? Couldnt you do em yourself? Also whyd the sound stop and the killer walk right up to the cops? is he retarded?
hehe, it kinda sounds like hes retarded. the reason i did the text-to-speech thing is that i am not very good at english myself and i dont have a mic. :)
Again Myeah
As I already said in my review of the first part, the voices of all personages are exactly the same...
Well, the story gets further and that's good... but i think it's a bit too EASY for that gp killer. He just comes to the cops, says "I'm gonna kill ya" (not exactly what he said, but it's what he means), and kills them!! the cops don't even make a mouvement to take their own weapons! a bit unrealistic...
Well, i'm gonna see the 3rd part...
I really didn't care for this. Where's the first episode? Oh yeah, it is here. I didn't like the speak-a-phone voices. Only Clocks should do that. Gun pointing is a weird name.
It actually seemed like GAP. I know people who hate GAP, like NewJoiseyWop. I don't think it's among your best work. At least it can be creative. Stick figures were all the rage back then.
i got a question
y does he call himself the gun pointing bastard instead of gun pointing killer???