uh...AHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Other than that, the dialogue wasn't really that good, comically or not. But then, I'm not playing this for the dialogue, am I? Except the girls pants. Those were great.
I give it an 8/10. Needs less uncensoring and more internal camera shots. On that note, less forcing you to view the cumshot from one angle, and also less of him pulling out immediately afterwards.