You need to fix the quality control of the sprite's, some look really badly compressed while other's look fine. Also I would recommend finding better audio for whatever song you used.
Reviews for "Naruto Ball Z Opening"
guardianprince1996 responds:
Thank you for your honesty. The next season will have a different opening and ending theme. While, the episodes and movies will be sure to have much much better quality and I can promise my fans and viewers that. Remember keep being honest your opinion truly helps.
Not bad , still It have a lot of fails , but i see talent in this , practise more and you will be so good :) for the moment this is only of 3 stars KEEP WORKING :D
guardianprince1996 responds:
Thank you. I like your honesty never be afraid to be point out any flaws. Even the best of series have some fails. So it's okay for anyone to be honest only if they use appropriate language.
good work on your part. i think i would watch an ep to see where youre going with this
guardianprince1996 responds:
Thank you. The idea of mixing two different worlds is something I give credit to Alvin-Earthworm for.
But i'll be sure to make sure the episodes explain the storyline of
Naruto Ball Z The Legends Of Battles.
sprites are overly stretched out half the time, the beginning was reaaaallly long and loops as if i was going around in circles, made me kinda dizzy. music was loud, and the ending overall too long to finish with the music. following the anime intros, they usually cut a song down to fit the air time, and match the animation with the music. sometimes to the beat. so, pointers on intros... 1: don't make people dizzy watching the whole thing. 2: try to keep from skewing your sprites when you use them. noodle-y characters are generally bad. 3: music should accent the images, not feel out of place, and not drown out everything else. 4: telling a story in the intro is great, though you may want to steer clear of lots of pauses... you have many of that, take too long to show something and the viewer gets bored, fast. try to fill in the pauses with more action, not just scenery loops.
hope this helps.
guardianprince1996 responds:
Thanks for the pointers.
i guess its KINDA cool.
guardianprince1996 responds:
Thank you. I hope you stay tuned for the episodes to come.