Very touching and beautiful ...WAY TO MELLOW OUT THE DAY lol!
Reviews for "A Fox Tale (Rough Draft)"
Is beatiful :D
Me gusto mucho tu video
That . was Beautiful. :D
Really sweet. :)
Maybe next time you can try to fixate the camera and/or the book - is it a book? - so that all the pages are in the same location. Also, the lighting could be a little bit better.
The piano piece is nice too. :)
This looks like it could be a good story. However, it's not ready to be submitted yet.
- The art was good. The drawings were nice. The simple format is actually an acceptable way of doing things. That works.
- Animate it. This was too slow to be animation, and it dragged on. It was more like a slideshow, and technically, slideshows aren't allowed on Newgrounds.
-The music was great.
-Keep your hands out of the pictures. Also, try to keep the edges straight. When the pages are moving all over the screen, it's very distracting.
I look forward to seeing the finished version of this. :)