S'all right. Good animation for sure, but confusing story
Reviews for "Sketch"
oogenblagen responds:
Yeah it was a little easier to understand when I first came up with the story, but the teacher said it had to be exactly a minute or he would cut off the extra frames himself, so tight space for a coherent story!
The sound of his steps is from cs:source amirite?
Overall ok, but the scene when the girl playing piano turns into a monster is a bit out of your ass.
6+/10
oogenblagen responds:
I'm not sure, I got the sound effect from flashkit.com, and yeah the entire second half was animated the night before it was due so it got a little rushed. As for the transition between the piano and the cat - yep that's fucked, I filmed it weird and had no time redo it bu the film had to be a minute longt so I just had to cop the weird awkward camera move.
Pretty good!
Very nicely animated, but rather stale sound effects and pacing. Concept is great, but could've used more bits.
You may want to check your file (Flash I assume?). Right when he enters the shark painting, there is a red line. I noticed this in one of my recent toons, it was a tween error that just changed the color of my line. Don't know why it happened...
Not very good , not very bad. i give 3.5 stars! :)