i kinda liked it, i guess
Reviews for "Dirtown"
I liked the combination of the animation and the music. They really went together. And the art style was a little rough, but appropriate. I would have liked to have seen some stuff that helped put some context on the characters. Maybe clearly visual wanted posters or the like, just to provide some extra details.
Noisy responds:
Indeed i thought that adding some posters and stuff can helped but...that details are characteristic of my favourite animator, i don't know if it's ok to copy that...peopla can see it like a plagio or something.
but you're right, i'll try to add some stuff...
thanks
Okay I was not expecting that but I do recommend putting a tag or two more so it is a bit easier to find. Also, look in your descriprion, you put mi when I take it that it was supposed to be my (not a problem really though).
Pros:
-Good unique music
-Art was good
-Decent action scene
Cons:
-Animation needs work
-Certain parts the art became a bit bad
-Noticed that the enemies looked changed towards the end but without much reason for it
-This one isn't a huge deal at all but how in the hell would he be staying perfectly upwards while on his horns even though they are curved and more towards his forehead ?
The biggest thing I would say is to work on your animation, not trying to sound mean here but it was probably the worst thing in this flash. I enjoyed it and it also looks like it could become a decent series if you put effort into it and found some voice actors. Hopefully you put more of your work on Newgrounds so many more may see it, best of luck.
Noisy responds:
I will, i need voice actors and that "mi" are both because im not an english speaker.
but i will put my efforts on all that. very helpful man ,thanks.
You need to work on the anatomy of your characters, obviously you have a great story to tell, but the atmosphere is diminished because of the poor quality of the characters, just give yourself time to really work them out in detail and then when you have every tooth and nail and the simplify them.
The concept wasn't too bad. The animation was good. But it's not too new. I don't think that use of text helped either. Without the text it would've been a bit better. Liked the music though. Over all not too shabby.